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I should have listened to my Mother, I thought bitterly. Shivering, I pulled my coat closer to my body. The snow gave sickening crunches beneath my feet. I was sick of snow [W/O COMMA] and the cold. My bare ears and uncovered face stung AS the cold wind slapped them. Never again would I let a friend borrow my scarf or hat. Focusing on my breath as it came out in a puffs of clouds, I again tried to cover myself more THAN I already was. Unable to get any warmer, I looked at my surroundings. Trees. They were colored the same as the falling snow. Above me ARE branches of millions of trees that engulfed me, snapped and swayed as if singing an eerie song that I was alone, and would forever be. Their song was deafening and becoming unbearable.